Honestly, I am quite agree with author's opinion, because writing can make people thinking deeper. Especially, when people writing about themselves. This is the rare chance to hear their inner voice, and they can find what they truly lack of or what they really need to do. Through writing about life journey, people can try to accept their real life, and they evaluate every element of lives and try to change life style. Finally, people could lead a better life with less regrets. I am also trying to keep an dairy, but , unfortunately, none of my dairy finished. However, I still get a lot from keeping a dairy. At high school, keeping dairy made me know myself better, and It tells me which subjects I should work on. My dairy also made me know I am an impatient person, so I am always trying to be more patient. Dairy also recorded every moment I have experienced. It leaves me an eternal memory.
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Tara (2015) states that Stanford researchers once carried an study about asking a part of African-American students to keep dairy or video to be seen by future students. The results have showed that the African-American students who cared about writing or video everyday achieved better grades. I was experiencing a period with a bad grade in my high school. At that time I really found keeping writing myself really helped me find my own problems, and promote me make more progress.
In conclusion, I agree with writing on people's own ways can help people.
References
Tara Parker-Pope. (2015, Jan 19). Writing Your Way to Happiness [Web log post]. Retrieved from http://well.blogs.nytimes.com/2015/01/19/writing-your-way-to-happiness/?_r=1&module=ArrowsNav&contentCollection=Health&action=keypress®ion=FixedLeft&pgtype=Blogs
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